Thursday, June 30, 2011

I just love you and there are plethora reasons


Walking on the grass she hears some clatter
My love I say to her it doesn’t matter
So we walk by the side looking at the stars
Without traffic signals and fast cars

Crossing the river hand in hand
With the freezing water and amber sand
No hustle bustle, in life there is no pain
And people utter love makes u insane

Easy to express and very hard to explain
Falling in love with the same person again and again
Moments spent with her are truly worthwhile.
No more tears only blissful smile

Sometimes I wonder how and why
Memories stay & the feelings don’t die
Green meadows with Dodger blue sky
The smile on her face & twinkle in her eye 

Wish we both were birds flying in the air
No territories, no boundaries and zilch to care
The kiss of breeze and touch of your hand
Love makes life easy to understand

Whenever you descend, wherever you fall
In the race of life or examination hall
I’ll stand beside you in all seasons
I just love you and there are plethora reasons


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47 comments:

  1. JayrajJune 30, 2011 at 2:33 AM

    Very well written sirji...welcome to blogging!

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  2. Nitesh.B.RaiJune 30, 2011 at 2:35 AM

    thanks jairaj..wanted to write for very long time.just an attempt

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  3. chetanJune 30, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    awesome buddy !!! simply awesome !!

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  4. Nitesh.B.RaiJune 30, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    thanks chetan..this might inspire to write more

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  5. kadriJune 30, 2011 at 3:58 PM

    nice!! verrrry nice !! i like it

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  6. Nitesh.B.RaiJune 30, 2011 at 4:01 PM

    shukran kadri...thanx

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  7. RajanJune 30, 2011 at 7:25 PM

    Excellent start to bloging with a romantic ode to "???"

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  8. Nitesh.B.RaiJune 30, 2011 at 8:44 PM

    hey thanks rajan....this means lot to an amatuer blogger

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  9. SurajJune 30, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    Damn ..tats some smooth shit !! ... U keepin it real bro ..Peace !!

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  10. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 1, 2011 at 12:04 AM

    thanx buddy for ur priceless comments

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  11. The Munn-key.July 1, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    Well Done Nitesh.! I like how you captured some emotions.

    Write more. =)

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  12. urvashi singhJuly 1, 2011 at 11:17 PM

    very nice nitesh...i didnt know about ur skills in writing....u r too good...write more soon we all are waiting...

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  13. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 1, 2011 at 11:22 PM

    mudi: u been an inspiration for such blogs..thanx

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  14. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 1, 2011 at 11:22 PM

    urvi:thanx ..this means lot..will write for sure

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  15. SreeRamJuly 2, 2011 at 1:47 AM

    Very well versed..... Simple, elegant and captivating !!!!....Now someone was telling me, they don't write good....If this is bad....Dying to see what good can be....You should definitely write more....Welcome to the fraternity....Cheers!!!

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  16. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 2, 2011 at 6:34 PM

    SRG: You have been a true inspiration.If it wasn't for your words of encouragement.Thanx bud..for being there in this world of bloggers

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  17. AnonymousJuly 2, 2011 at 7:01 PM

    there read it n posted a comment too :) kept my promise:)

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  18. MRKJuly 2, 2011 at 10:04 PM

    Good start bro and its been written well ...I loved ur thghts and imagination...Overall I rate this best so far from your side !

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  19. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 2, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    Anonymous: Thanx for the commentless comment..made sense

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  20. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 2, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    MRK: this is always be my best as this is my first baby in writing..

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  21. IbrahimJuly 3, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    A really nice topic for a first post; didn't expect you to be so well connected to your romantic side haha.
    I do have to say though, very well written and nice expression...keep it up and keep writing more buddy :)

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  22. ParvezJuly 3, 2011 at 9:20 AM

    Good one Dude. I will rate it 10 out of 10.
    So Romantic...........Keep it up.

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  23. SUNILJuly 3, 2011 at 1:52 PM

    very creative & conspicuous thought ..
    You can't wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club. ~Jack London
    ........keep it up ...

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  24. DeepaJuly 3, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    Good One...

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  25. manojshettyJuly 3, 2011 at 8:06 PM

    AWESOME, A new POET in the making. Are we looking at the next William Shakespeare??????

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  26. sunil KumarJuly 4, 2011 at 2:20 PM

    waah kavi maharaj,ur talents are coming to the fore,Yes and u can be the next William Shake"his"spear:)lol

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  27. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 4, 2011 at 4:53 PM

    Ibrahim:Such magnitude of beauty with words.thank you bud

    Parvez: Thank u for the kind remarks..

    Sunil Mh: nice thought.thanx

    Deepa: :)

    Manoj: big brother..thank u so much

    Sunil: hope so i create my own identity in blogging :)

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  28. UnknownJuly 4, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    hey nice one ... but m sure u can write better .. ;-)

    waiting for the next one ..

    best lines i liked are 17 and 18 ...

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  29. Moe.G.July 5, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    Good work bro, keep up the passion...

    next poem go for deeper, vague metaphors, that way people will relate to it differently

    good job... cheers

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  30. Nitesh.B.RaiJuly 5, 2011 at 5:29 PM

    moe.g: Ur comemnts inspired my writing to the next level.surely will post few more

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  31. Mahesh ShettyJuly 6, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    good and keep going nutopia........

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  32. nayanJuly 6, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    welldone dude,,,,went in past for a moments...

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  33. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    Saurabh Shetty said:reminded me of that rotomac jingle - "likhte likhte love ho jaaye"

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  34. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    Vaishali Bhujade-Desai said: Lovely ....awesome!!!! direct dil se......keep it up.

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  35. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    Tanmay Parte said: Badhiya hain Sirje.....excellent ....specially it being your first one...keep bloging

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  36. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 4:52 PM

    Nikhil Shetty said: subhanallah ek shayar ki ruh bassi hai aaapke blog mein hahaha

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  37. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    Chetan Shetty said:who woke up the poet in u bro ???? anythin special ?? ;-)

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  38. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 5:21 PM

    Tobby Rodrigues said:Good Job Rai Saab.........

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  39. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    Smitha Shetty said: oh mymy....very romantic... acha hai.. kp blogn... cheers!!!

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  40. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    Priyanka Jangid said :Vry nice poem.... !!!!

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  41. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    Smita Jobi said: very well written.gave the right words to the thoughts..keep it up !!!!!!!!!!

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  42. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 5:25 PM

    Paresh Chavan said: Good Poem to start with. I know where it started (The English Class) ... I guess Victoria, Charmaine, Andrea, Serena and Helen must be proud of you today. Ha Ha..

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  43. AnonymousJuly 10, 2011 at 12:54 PM

    this one's super cool VK, looking forward to read some more of the LOVE stuff,,loved it!!!

    Req: please pen down some realistic and true FRIENDSHIP stuff too..

    will keep an eye!!

    just wondering whether i should continue calling you VK... coz tussi toh blogging vich vadiya kaam kar rahe ho jii, set hai, ekdum fit hai!!!

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  44. nikiJuly 10, 2011 at 6:37 PM

    Nitesh....too good...i didn't know you are such a good writer...and a port too

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  45. nikiJuly 10, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    I meant a very good poet

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  46. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2012 at 7:10 PM

    liked it.... :)

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  47. GamchiMay 15, 2012 at 12:35 AM

    I always saw Salman Khan in you during Engg Days..

    But you are too Poetic..

    Keeping writing....

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